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Naruto Uzumaki

Naruto Uzumaki is a hyper-active ninja of the Hidden Leaf Village and a member of Team 7. Shortly after his birth, the Nine-Tailed Fox was sealed inside of him, but this was kept a secret from him for years. Still, he dreams to become the greatest ninja, the Hokage.

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Moderator FoxxFireArt created this community task on Aug. 28, 2011.

CHANGES REQUESTED: Page Formatting , Fill Me In

Streamline Initiative: Though the profiles looks good, the Story Arcs section is just far too detailed. Condense the events into as few paragraphs as possible, focus on just Naruto's actions, and organize by story arc names. See Nami & Nico Robin profiles for examples.

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Important parts: Training, Death of Hinata, Meeting of father, Hero
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takashichea moderator on Aug. 30, 2011 at 6:14 p.m.

I don't mind getting help since this character page is longer than Eleanor Mercer's page. Right now, I'm just trimming and simplifying the arcs one by one. I would like to rewrite the sections, but it's someone's work.

Edit:

Looking at the other wikia sites for Naruto, they're pretty detailed. The page can afford to lose some information to make it clearer.

Sasuke Retrieval arc is 7 paragraphs. I chop it down to 4 if I can.

Since I got school, I will try to finish this by Friday.

takashichea moderator on Sept. 3, 2011 at 7:26 p.m.

Sorry if I did not make up my promise. It was long. I think the Pain arc needs more trimming and another arc.

With school heading to its second week, I think I won't do the bounties fast enough since I still have to the plot summaries with Anna each week: Blue Exorcist, Sket Dance, Beelzebub, and Fairy Tail are still ongoing.

It's take a week for me to streamline the others if they are as long as Naruto's page. I took the long way of streamlining it because I don't want to sacrifice too much detail that it will confuse the readers.

Edit:

Looks like I'm going to need some help streamlining since Naruto's task took almost a week or more to do. It's tough because I haven't watch Naruto in a long time.

Edit 9-26-2011

Pain Arc

I find five topics for five paragraphs which are key.

  1. Death of Jiraiya's Effects andTraining
  2. Battle with Pain's Paths
  3. Death of Hinata
  4. Release of Kyuubi
  5. A Hero
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