Shit, rewriting my RP post the 4th time.
You can wonder why. Well, there are several reasons. Most impotnatnly it has been a long while since I last used Keith White. So I have to pretty much recreate his entire character.
Anyways, it's rather selfish of me to except you to wait until I finish my post. So let me mention a few plotholes the RP currently has and ways to mend them.
1.) First and foremost: Washigton DC. In the old "How the Mighty Have Fallen" RP, Ray Donovan used a nuclear missile on the capital city, destroying it and turning its environment into a nuclear wasteland. That would make half of the RP posts totally useless since Washington DC no longer exists.
Solution: Assistance from the White Corps, obviously. After Ray Donovan's treachery and plunging the USA into emotional, financial and political crisis, Keith White offered to aid America to rebuild Washington DC and save the supernation from collapse. Using the White Corps' super science he turned the radiation into harmless particles.
2.) Time discrepancy between the Kisekian army's conquest and Zella's assault on Washigton DC. Even if ND has teleportation and the Kisekian Air Force is several times faster than modern jets, it still takes considerable time. If anything the fact each nation's government had a chance to react and even mobilize their forces is a proof enough that ND's conquest tour took many-many hours. By not counting the bureaucratic procedures and other things and just using a generous estimate, that would be at least 12 hours. Now, compare it with Zella's invasion which prett much went in real time and only took an hour at best.
Solution: I suggest to use two different timelines to continue this RP. One for the ongoing battle in Washignton DC. Another for the Kisekian Army's conquest. There could be also a tertiary timeline for the Atahlia vs Carmilla fight since it seemingly takes place further on in the process of ND's invasion.
Yeah, I agree that adding separate timelines is a pain. But the advantages easily outweigh the drawbacks. First off, it allows us to keep track of the events more properly. Second, if there's convincing interval between these timelines it's possible for someone to fight multiple battles "at once". Technically they still happen in order but this method would allow a much more flexible style. Third, speaking of flexible RP style this "timeline method" would allow the story to flow on several plotlines at once. There would be less waiting for other users to post in the RP.
3.) Why Keith didn't do anything despite the Vice verse is in the middle of apocalyptic chaos? Why he didn't do anything even after Keith's dear home country was under attack? ND even destroyed an entire city and dropped 3 nukes on another. What is he waiting for?
Solution: Well, let's say Keith is more of an uncaring bastard. That and he was waiting for a certain chance to arise. He's coolheaded and don't wish to make hasty actions in a situation where ND can take over the world anytime.
That's all for now. I can't promise anything since my work scheclude messes up m writing plans constantly. But I can promise that I will try to finish my RP post as soon as possible.