THEWETONESME (Level 8)

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Post by THEWETONESME (7 posts) See mini bio Level 8

Fan-Fic » Snow

http://www.wattpad.com/7847044-snow

here's the new rewrite

Post by THEWETONESME (7 posts) See mini bio Level 8

Fan-Fic » "a princesses' adventure"

not trying to mean but what.You have to tell why see running away and when did the boy get in the story.You have to have a background story on everyone in the story.This story makes no scene to me at all.Advice to another writer you have to write it so anyone can understand it.I did the same thing when i post my first story, I just put down ideas.Look over your story again and redo it.I not being mean am just saying, if you want this story to a book or a show, am just trying to help you.The story a good idea but its kind of hard to understand. My story is called SNOW.

Post by THEWETONESME (7 posts) See mini bio Level 8
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