Shinigami_Rider (Level 9)

Okay NOW THAT IS CREEPY!! I swear I did not see this before going to sleep yesterday. o_0 http://t.co/5ZhlwTlI http://t.co/bYLmRLLd
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To tell the truth i`m neither a ''Healthy'' fan nor a DFC fan i`m more of a middle guy they don`t need to be DD`s all the time.
But if you`d ask me straight forward i`d still lean more to the healthy types.
And that`s about it ^^
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Birth
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 A gr`kallm
 A gr`kallm
 
Eons ago and light years away there was an insectiode empire called the gr`kallm who ruled the planet the inhabited with an iron first for millennia. but when the time came and they where able to travel space. They realised that they couldn't survive even the shortest space trip because their physique was build in such a way that their lungs would collapse on the trip there. So unlike other species who would no doubt find an way to make an artificial way of dealing with the problem, they turned to genetics! With some years past and millions of clones dead the war hungry gr`kallm finally succeeded to make an super soldier prototype, but it looked nothing like them it had only two limbs and was much smaller, it also acted differently although at first it seemed much more aggressive and a success the little being soon showed a much weaker side compassion. Hating the very thought of having made this weak horror in their eyes they tried to change it. They tortured it with all kinds of painful devices to make it an more aggressive and defensive monster. Having somewhat succeeded they finally tried to make it stronger with experimental chemicals and progressive walk trough experimental energy gates which seemed unsuccessful in the first few stages, but soon after the little creature grew more buffed and a little bit bigger. Finally content after months of toying with the clone they ordered it to enter an down-sized experimental spaceship and blew it off to space. The creature having survived the breaking of the planets orbit soon found out that the ship itself wasn't even ready for the trip. Uncontrollable it launched it self far away from the planet and soon got stuck in the helix of an black hole which it was sucked into. This was the last time they would see this creature.
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Dark Loneliness
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There in the black hole having survived the crushing gravitational pull thanks to its unique structure and those countless experiments and tortures. It braces itself in its seat and looks up out of the window, he sees the very structure of the universe being warped and shaped in a way we have yet to or never are going to experience. suddenly he was snapped out of this by a sudden feeling of a massive presence he could not see, this was met with a cold and lonely feeling, yet it had cruel and malicious aura which felt heavy and dark. The little creature then felt the dirty emotion called sadness. It felt like being betrayed by the whole universe. It felt like being trapped in a eternal hail of glass shards which ripped trough his body armour like a knife trough paper. Even though it doesn't have a heart as we know it or even an heart as the gr`kallm locals know it. These feelings still ran through his very essence and wrapped itself around him. Not being able to withstand it any more he takes it in himself he absorbs all the sadness, all the cold loneliness and all other emotions that where presented to him in that dark place. he could not make a sound or rather made a sound that was so loud that it could not be heard. All those emotions that choose to bond with him caused him so much pain that he felt like he was slowly taken apart molecule by molecule which in a way he was. Till the emotions which once seemed everywhere became nothing more the a little spot of darkness in his body. He fell unconscious and the pain he once felt went away.... and the first and last thing he heard in this darkness was ''gift''.
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The Burning Planet
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 Everything is Burning!!
 Everything is Burning!!
 
Billions of years have passed as the creature awoke on a different planet with unfamiliar faces staring down on him, These beings Didn't exist when the creature first became stuck in the black hole, yet by now they are at the hight of their evolution and have just begone with space exploration. These fat little creatures calling themselves weirdly enough the Hams believe the gr`kallm experiment to be their god ever since their scientists detected a heart beat in the middle of their planet. This was according to their religion the place where their one true god created their planet and everything around it. Though they knew of him for thousands of years by now they didn't have the technology or the need to free him. But now they do because their planet is by now dying since the bi-polar suns are going supernova and they hoped the creature would save them. but it turned out the creature isn't what they expected he wasn't a god or a saviour he was almost worthless, the only use they had for him was the fact that aliens do exist and if he`s been there forever there might be other habitable planets nearby. So the Ham spend the remaining few months trying to teach the now ancient creature they`re language in the hope that he will fit in plan B. In the last month of the Planets live they finally succeeded the creature has now learned they`re language and agreed to be their navigator for the small ark they made. And without knowing what will happen next they launch the ship in to space looking back as the civilisation dies the planet looking like a burning eclipse.
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The Escape
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For weeks they roamed in the solitude of the open void hoping to get to the planet they had set course to. And during the long lonely voyage the creature was tempted by a soft voice. A voice he trusted, a voice he cared for even though he did not know who or what it was. It was tempted to do ''Its'' bidding and Its bidding was that the creature should eat and eat. So when they finally passed the outer planets of the system, It hid in the shadows and started to hunt child by child till every one of those young foolish creatures would be slowly devoured by its sharp mandibles. It did not spill even the slightest drop of fluid nor the smallest piece of bone. The pudgy weaklings did not stand a chance, being so peaceful and trusting made them oblivious to attack. They did not even have effective weapons on board because they trusted the now ancient creature so much they had not even researched a way to destroy it just in case. 

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