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Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » Dante Braveheart (BIO)

@AnimeDefender: If he can regenerate a limb in an hour how fast would he regenerate minor wounds, that end up being important (Fights have lasted longer than an hour)

The main problem of your character is that he haves to many powers.

If I were you I would only start with Telekinesis, Telepathy, Peak Human stats (or barely superhuman) and his equipment. I would lower the damage output he can deliver and then I would use Telekinesis leveling up through the threads to justify other powers, such as the Teleportation (Use Telekinesis to move matter from one point of space to the other) or Invisibilty (Using TK to bend the incoming light bouncing it back and making the character undetectable.) Having lots of powers doesnt make your character powerful, knowing those powers is the real deal.

I had a character that only could use limited aerokinesis and was a skilled swordsman fighting basically a Superman/Madara/Lex Luthor fusion and keep fighting, I lost the fight but I learn a lot about playing RP. Having a monster of a character isnt good, having a great character that is flawed, that's the real deal

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » Dante Braveheart (BIO)

@AnimeDefender: Nice start, still he is a bit overpowered with 50 ton strength, regeneration and a myriad of powers, like Teleport, Invisibilty and Energy manipulation that make him quite powerful. Start small and then keep getting stronger in-game, snowballing narrative power-ups

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » Vice Mecha Heroes RPG - Sign-Up and OOC Discussion

@Galenbeta: Once again remember this is a constructive critic

1. If you are going to post again you should wait for other players to do so first, so the story can advance, in the case you forgot to add something just edit your previous point.

2. Giga Drill Breaker? Seriously?

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

Battles » Domon vs Kira and Setsuna

@Masterofdeath: Domon would win, but with mid to high difficulty another pilot (depending on who) could tip the balance

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

Battles » Bardock vs Nappa

@ReiKai: I love this one. The most moronic, shark jumping, ascenite bullshit ever!

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

Battles » Domon vs Kira and Setsuna

I'm willing to bet on Domon, he is fast enough to avoid being tagged by Mr Beam Spam Yamato and the moment he gets into close range he wins.

He haves the Sekiha Tenkyoken in Mid Range, that is quite powerful

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

Battles » Nono vs Starfire

SUPER INAZUMA KICK!!!!

And it's over

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

Battles » Black Lantern Aquaman vs Posidon

This thread is OUTRAGEOUS!

Is obvious that Poseidon wins....

You thought I was going to say Aquaman after the outrageous bit didnt you?

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » RPG Training and Trainers

@Masterofdeath: @Galenbeta: Thanks

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

Battles » Superman + Goku + Thor vs Saint Seiya

@AnimeDefender: Omega is a watered down version. More child friendly, or better say Toei Producer friendly. The original is quite violent, with blood, arms being cut off and several gruesome moments.

I highly recomend the original series (even the Asgard Filler, that is basically a how-to guide about making an awesome epic ass-kicking filler), the first part of the Hades series and the Third (Legend of the Scarlet Youth) and Fifth Movies (Tenkai-Hen Operture).

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » RPG Training and Trainers

@Masterofdeath: That's very accurate, excellent!

@Galenbeta: Originally this forum was build under the premise of original content only, at least it was like that since I started almost 3 years ago. Just recently the animeverse have started. Most of the players here feel pride on our work, as the ideas come from us and the characters are reflections in some parts of us, thus we like the characters and we like them to grow and individual characters unhindered by other people ideas. In conclusion, I dont really mind if your character is a ragtag of different animes turned into a Marty Stu (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MartyStu) but my main problem is the inclusion of such character to the original world we forged through years and years of effort. I love this forum and I love it specially because the Original Content, as I love it for that reasons is my wish that others love it for the same reasons.

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » RPG Training and Trainers

@Galenbeta: Really? They werent useful?

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

Battles » Delinquent characters vs. Names inside

Kenichi is really hardcore can take a lot of punishment and his fighting prowess could be considered weak against master class enemies in his series, but in Street Fighting Level he is quite strong. Kenichi is physically strong, thanks to the training he is really strong check his OBD entry http://outskirtsbattledome.wikispaces.com/Character+Profile+-+Kenichi+Shirahama

Not to mention the really hax Seikuken.

I'm betting on Kenichi in any case, specially as he dislikes bullies

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » RPG Training and Trainers

@Shadowchaos: Thanks

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » (RPG)Vice Mecha Heroes - Mission 00

A dark blur shot through the atmosphere and reached space, the vast void populated by the stars and planets. The sensors of the Black Wolf picked up a fight and without a hint of hesitation its bold pilot turned the myriad of levers that hanged from the sides of the cockpit with incredible speed and skill, he was born to do this, son of soldiers with the blood ancestral blood of the Mighty Chojin Race. His face turned into a wolfish grin as he dashed forward towards the battlefield, as beams lighted the dark void of space with a shower of colors. Some could find it beautiful or even awe-inspiring, but the man that called himself Batsu ignored the incredible moment as any warrior tempered in steel, fire and blood would and pushed towards the fray with a roar.

-GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY WAY YOU BACKWATER HICKS! I’M GOING TO BREAK THE LINE OF THAT PITUFUL ENEMY IN FRONT OF YA- The Black Terror guided his machine, a Custom Mondat of the Chojin designed especially for close combat and it shows as the nanoforge in his chest created a couple of axes that the robot pulled from its chest and charged towards the attacking force. With savage enthusiasm and glee the Black Wolf started to rampage, hacking and slashing anything near him, while using his incredible speed and maneuverability, mostly thanks to Batsu expert piloting, a talent built from experience, rather than a god given gift, to avoid incoming attacks, or positioning to take them in the most fortified zones of the Mondat.

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

Off-Topic » Video Game Club

I'm waiting for the GTA online I even got the headset so my poor spoken english can be heard as I slaughter the WORLD.. I may try to make a RP room someday

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

Battles » Junior Captains Duke It Out

Toshiro is way overrated, I'm saying the same as GeneralVan except that I switch Toshiro for Komamura

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » Conquerer - Pretender - Locksmith - King (BIO)

@SamJaz: Ahhhh It seemed like it. Ok

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » RPG Training and Trainers

@Galenbeta: But those links are the basics of how-to-play, if you dont master the basics you will not level up your writting and with leveled up writing everything is easier. I love this forum, mostly because of the inclination towards Original Content, and I have always tried to help expand such content. I'm sure there are at least five active RPG forums with Attack on Titan Thematic RP that are surely better prepared or have a bigger quantity of players willing to participate or a bigger quantity of players period.

I found most of the anime inspired threads sharing problems with fanfiction (a genre I mostly despise) as the works of another author should remain that way, that's the reason the original authors are so good at writting it, as it comes from their heads. In my experience making Original Content is easier than copying others as you're either restricted by the limitations imposed by such action as trying to emulate a world and characters that arent yours. When you write from your own heart and mind it all clicks easier than when you just try to ram your ideas into an already created world. I know this by experience as I had to face that problematic on my current job, as I'm writting scripts for an animated series that wasnt my original idea, thus I have to comform to pre-established directives instead of letting my imagination run free.

Thus, concluding, I highly recomend that you level up your basic writting through the Original Content Rp rather than tackling blindly a series based RP. If you still want to keep going is your choice, this is only a reccomendation that shouldnt be taken as an offense or an insult, I'm just trying to help. Please read the links and soak in their wisdom, I was really bad when I start but thanks to those links and some hands-on experience I became good enough to work as profesional writer

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

RPG » Vice Mecha Heroes RPG - Sign-Up and OOC Discussion

@SamJaz: LOL Hacbeth! I think he is still pestering but in comicvine, or at least that was the last time I saw him

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