I'm too focused in how I think the story should go, no how it really moves, and most of the time I end improvising.... I surely have more flaws, but another one of them is that I dont realize most of them... And I'm kind of impatient
@Newdeath: Same for me. I find descriptions too easy. Also I like to focus on the emotional impact of the words and using the magic number of 3.:P Like you I often find myself doing too many descriptions. I always cut down on them a little to make my posts ore clear. My real flaw is the slow posting rate. I'm improving though but due to my exams I can't spend that much time to thinker on RP nowadays.