(Character Bio) Ryūdo Kurokami

Topic started by LHWKnight on July 24, 2014. Last post by LHWKnight 1 month, 3 weeks ago.
Post by LHWKnight (2,735 posts) See mini bio Level 12

Age: 18

Height 5'7

Weight 260

Occupation: College student, mercenary for stopping invasion from the hidden world.

Race: Human

Powers: Celestial body

Loyalties: Lucy & Abel

Ryūdo Kurokami

Ryūdo a child born of the world, what this means is unknown, but it may have to do with the fact that his life-force gives of the aura of a Celestial body.

Personality

Ryūdo is, by nature a mischievous and flirtatious teen, although usually he maintains the appearance of someone who is laid-back and carefree.

He is very confident in his own abilities, although can be very cocky, using it as a rouse to anger his opponents into attacking him, and in doing so becomes sloppy, which allows him to take them out in an instant.

His growth has to be in his personality, he thinks that his powers will be enough to solve most of his problems and is pessimistic and never takes much of his situations seriously.

History

Having lost both of his parents at the age of 10 Ryūya lived with his older brother for the next seven years until one day he was led to another world by spirits through a portal.

Upon entering the hidden world, he had found himself within the walls of castle and was cornered by demon guards.

The Demons started talking in some weird language, before they tried to attack him. Having been tried by his brother in the art of fighting since the death of their parents, Ryūdo was able to hold his own against the lesser demons until the demons had called in reinforcements and surrounded him.

As they all tried to attack him however, his entire body and his disintegrated the demons in an instant.

After wandering further into the Castle, he stumbled upon the throne room, where he witnessed a man whose face was decked out in silver armor attack another person who was shrouded in darkness.

The was a loud clashing sound and the next thing Ryūdo saw was the man whose face was shrouded in darkness fall to the ground.

The guy in the armor said a few words to the "Seemed to be" dying man and then a portal opened up and chained came from the void and dragged the person in.

After making sure that the man-dragon was gone, Ryūdo started to explore the castle more until he was spotted by a girl who had come running from where the battle had taken place.

Seeing him as an intruder she attempted to subdue him with her limited magic, but failed as Ryūdo took her out in an instant, before she knew what was happening.

Deciding that he needed to leave, Ryūdo lifted the girl up bridal style and put her on a bed in the nearest room he could find.

He looked at her one last time before he left the castle and headed into the forest, which was surprisingly empty, since all of the demons had headed straight for the castle after the master of the castle was reported dead.

Ryūdo soon came upon a village nearby and had check himself into an inn for the night.

The next day, after having breakfast and a nearby restaurant, he had asked around for directions to a portal that world take him back to the human world.

As soon as Ryūdo was about to enter the portal, the girl from the other day had come running towards him. She was being chased by a group of soldiers.

Seeing that the girl needed help and because his pride wouldn't allow him to ignore a woman who was in danger, he grabbed a hold of her and pulled her into the portal with him before the guards could make it.

Later that night, Ryūdo had brought her to his little bachelor's pad and the two finally introduced themselves. It turns out that the girl was Lucy Lucifer Satan, the daughter of the Demon king Lucifer.

It turns out that Lucy had lost her father years ago, who was know imprisoned in the void and had been staying with her uncle Beelzebub.

Ryūdo was slightly surprised as he had no idea he had ended up in the demon lord castle, well it should have been obvious but he hadn't been paying too much attention.

Ryūdo then explained to her that they were know in his world and that from now on she would be staying with him, since she was most likely being hunted by the people of her world.

The next morning, Ryūdo's older brother Abel came by looking for him, saying that he hadn't heard from the boy since the day before.

Ryūdo let his brother in and explained to him what had been going on. Abel was surprised when he met Lucy, but had not been scared because as it stands, he was the person with the strongest life-force energy.

So after all the explanations were finished, Abel had decided that it was finally time to tell his brother that the company he owned was not a pharmaceutical company and instead was an organization charged with protected the citizens from creatures that escaped the other world.

And he told Ryūdo that he had come because the young adult's powers had awakened and he was coming to take him to the organization.

Because of the fact that Ryūdo has invaded the other world, kidnapped the princess of darkness and broken the treaty, he is now public number one in the eyes of hidden world, the kingdom of Grandia (Good faction from the other world) and the devils empire (Form the other-world Grandia).

Powers

Celestial Body: Semi-immortality (can't die of old age, but can be killed) , eternal youth, age empowerment: Gain access of even more of my powers over time. with or without training, will decide how much power.

The amount of energy that is felt is enough to engulf an entire city from the tallest skyscraper to 30 feet underground. The amount that can be accessed at any given moment is only enough to destroy a city block.

Ryūdo's strength is well beyond a normal human ever since he was a kid and way before his power awakened. He could lift a bus full of people.

Building level: Can knock down a building with the force of his punch. His legs are strong enough to the point to he can leap over buildings that are not as tall as skyscrapers and able to jump from one one area to another area that is two to three blocks away.

Speed: Ryūdo can run 5x the speed of sound without the uses of his powers.

Durability: Because he had been able to break the sound barrier at a young age, Ryūdo has had to endure the impact of the sound barrier shattering and injuring him multiple times, and is at the point where he can endure it without sustaining damage. city block: a bomb immunity (Bombs that can take out a half s city block, normal bullet immunity (Meaning they bounce of his skin).

His senses and reflexes are as sharp as a fox, complementing his mischievous personality.

ever-evolving Immunity factor: his immunity grows every-time he is exposed to any new form of disease, radiation etc and he will be able to survive a second encounter.

(diseases like aids and HIV and other toxins and bacteria that attack the immune system will be taken out since the immune system takes the data of the disease and develop something that will destroy it in under a few seconds)

Interpersonal intelligence: Able to analysis ones own strengths and weaknesses in a particular setting and learn to adjust correctly.

Style of combat

Focus on fast combat, hitting key areas on the body with precision and enough power to shatter bone and sever tenants in the body. Ryūdo also concentrates on reading the opponents body language to predict each physical attack and counters them.

goes for this style of fighting before he has to resort to using his abilities, because they require too much concentration.

Abilities

Destructive energy manipulation: The Light of Arcana: Void energy manipulation.

The light of Arcana Energy
The light of Arcana Energy

Anti energy manipulation: The ability to destroy all forms of energy. Limits are depending the amount of energy will determine how much power and force it takes to destroy something completely.

Irreversible destruction: the energy that is destroyed by Ryūdo can never be repair, sort of reversing the flow of time on the specific moment before it was destroyed.

Limitation: the force of the attack may break through and the ability has to be focused or else it will negate itself and leave Ryūdo wide open.

So sense he can destroy a few buildings anything with enough force to take out more than a few buildings will break through his powers. (Whether, its the force of a fiery of beams or one single beam)

It can also be used as potent attacks to obliterate the enemy like any normal attack.

The range of this ability is 360 degrees and the limited area the ability negation spans is an entire city block. He can focus this energy into his point of attack.

Range is just the distance he can stretch the ability out that is why it is 360.

Character theme

Black or white.

Relationships

Lucy Lucifer Satan:

She is half fallen angel half vampire daughter of Lucifer the fallen angel and Lilith the vampire queen. She lives with Ryūdo in his one bedroom bachelor's pad.

Appearance

For the most part, Lucy maintains the appearance of a petite, short young girl with pale skin, long blonde hair, uniquely blonde eyelashes and red eyes. However, her true form is that of a beautiful adult woman that she can assume during combat.

Personality

Lucy can be described as a Leticia is a quiet and reserved girl, preferring to go with the flow rather than assert herself. She is quite prideful in her status as a vampire and a devil hybrid, however she despises the fact that she is the daughter of the Devil Lucifer, as the man was a lazy good for nothing, who got imprisoned because he allowed his arrogance to get the better of him and the fact that he believed that all beings should fear and worship him as a god. (Which makes sense because he was a demigod)

Lucy seems to be bothered by Ryūdo's flirting tendencies, as she finds them enduring.

Powers

Vampire Lord Physiology: The most powerful class of vampires. semi-Immortality - live forever/ Die if killed. Daytime Walking - Vampire Lords are able to withstand daylight for ever.

Twilight energy manipulation: User can create, shape and manipulate twilight, mixed essence of light and darkness. Energy constructs: whips, claws, shields and spikes.

Darkness Healing: can heal physical damage by drinking blood and pouring dark energy into the person.

Blood servants: anyone she injects the vampire gene into her victims. they gain the powers of vampire magic and a boost in physical prowess. (Peek humans become superhuman, normal human becomes peek human.)

Blood empowerment: Grow more powerful from drinking the blood of Ryūdo and the enemy.

Charolette Minamoto: future playable character

The granddaughter of Genji Gozaburo.

Age: 19

Race: Human

Sorceress of Grandia

Charlotte is a prodigy sorceress, who unlocked her powers at the age of 5 after being spirited away by the spirits of the Grandia. Charolette lost her parents at the age for four and has been living with her grandfather for most of her life.

Personality

Charlette has multiple layers to her personality. At face value she seems like the tip rich girl, who has this aura of nobility. Personality wise, Charolette is a confident and hold herself with an air of authority, yet is kind and friendly to people who she considers to be her friends.

Charlette is also slightly shy and easily embarrassed when her closest friends compliment her. because of this, she will revert to using what others dubbed the embarrassed rich girl forte.

Powers and ability

Guiding light of Grandia: This ability awakened on the day Charlotte was spirited away to the outer-world Grandia at the age of five. It gives her the ability to wield the spirits guides of grandia.

Spirit manipulation: The ability to wield the souls that govern the world of grandia, yet they are also the spirits that created, Yokai and Demons.

The spirits are what has been causing children to be spirited away, and it is all random as they lack a separate conscious of their own, but instead react to emotions or the presences of children with powerful souls.

Charlotte can manipulate these spirits in their purest form as she was bestowed the title of Sorceress of Grandia. Charlotte's main use for these spirits in spirit construct. She wears an enchanted dress that she had created by weaving the spirits together.

The dress works much like enhanced battle armor as it is strong enough to tank a small nuke-like blasts, and absorb most of the impact so that the force doesn't mutilate her body.

Charlotte's heels help increase her speed and reaction to mach 5 and she can use the spirits to fly. Charlotte created a sword from the spirits that she named the holy sword of Grandia.

Her sword is literally the strongest in creation, as it can't be destroyed by anything short of spirit destruction. Her sword can also cut right through a persons soul, destroying it without ever physically touching the body, however doing so takes precise precession and those with powerful souls can evade, or take more than one or two blows.

Charlotte final ability is that she can revitalize others by merging the spirits into a persons body. the more serious the wound, the more spirits if may take and it is impossible to bring the dead back to life, but she still has a chance to save someone who is knocking on deaths door.

She has an unmatched spiritual awareness and can communicate the spirit off all worlds. She is very flexible as she has been in gymnastics for most of her life in school, meaning that she can bend her body in very "interesting ways"

Charlotte's abilities in a nutshell.

  • Spiritual world manipulation.
  • Spiritual healing
  • Spiritual sword construct
  • enhanced speed and reflexes
  • enhanced spiritual awareness.

Sorceress of Grandia

Charlotte is a prodigy sorceress, who unlocked her powers at the age of 5 after being spirited away by the spirits of the Grandia. Charolette lost her parents at the age for four and has been living with her grandfather for most of her life.

Personality

Charlette has multiple layers to her personality. At face value she seems like the tip rich girl, who has this aura of nobility. Personality wise, Charolette is a confident and hold herself with an air of authority, yet is kind and friendly to people who she considers to be her friends.

Charlette is also slightly shy and easily embarrassed when her closest friends compliment her. because of this, she will revert to using what others dubbed the embarrassed rich girl forte.

Powers and ability

Guiding light of Grandia: This ability awakened on the day Charlotte was spirited away to the outer-world Grandia at the age of five. It gives her the ability to wield the spirits guides of grandia.

Spirit manipulation: The ability to wield the souls that govern the world of grandia, yet they are also the spirits that created, Yokai and Demons.

The spirits are what has been causing children to be spirited away, and it is all random as they lack a separate conscious of their own, but instead react to emotions or the presences of children with powerful souls.

Charlotte can manipulate these spirits in their purest form as she was bestowed the title of Sorceress of Grandia. Charlotte's main use for these spirits in spirit construct. She wears an enchanted dress that she had created by weaving the spirits together.

The dress works much like enhanced battle armor as it is strong enough to tank a small nuke-like blasts, and absorb most of the impact so that the force doesn't mutilate her body.

Charlotte's heels help increase her speed and reaction to mach 5 and she can use the spirits to fly. Charlotte created a sword from the spirits that she named the holy sword of Grandia.

Her sword is literally the strongest in creation, as it can't be destroyed by anything short of spirit destruction. Her sword can also cut right through a persons soul, destroying it without ever physically touching the body, however doing so takes precise precession and those with powerful souls can evade, or take more than one or two blows.

Charlotte final ability is that she can revitalize others by merging the spirits into a persons body. the more serious the wound, the more spirits if may take and it is impossible to bring the dead back to life, but she still has a chance to save someone who is knocking on deaths door.

She has an unmatched spiritual awareness and can communicate the spirit off all worlds. She is very flexible as she has been in gymnastics for most of her life in school, meaning that she can bend her body in very "interesting ways"

Charlotte's abilities in a nutshell.

  • Spiritual world manipulation.
  • Spiritual healing
  • Spiritual sword construct
  • enhanced speed and reflexes
  • enhanced spiritual awareness.

Yukine LeonHeart: future playable character

Age: 18

Eye color: brown

Hair color: Light brown

Occupation: College student

Ability: Gaia

Yukine is the younger sister of Issac Leonheart and is also a college student. She was spirited away to the outer-world eight years prior, while she was at school and she had been missing for the rest of day.

She had appeared at the heart of a forest full of yokai. She had wondered the through forest, until she had come across a little cat yokai getting chased by a demon.

Yukine jumped in to protect the cat yokai from the demon, but it didin't take long for the demon to gain the advantage and was just about to kill her, when her ability had awakened and she ripped the demon apart in an instant.

Yukine then started to tend to the cat yokai's injuries and had chosen to bring it home with her.

When she had returned, her brother and father started training her in using her powers.

Personality

Yukine is a slightly shy young woman, who has trouble talking to people and usually won't unless spoken to first. This however does not stop her from making friends, as she is fully capable of making friends. She is gentle by nature, rarely ever getting upset, unless someone hurts her friends and it takes a lot to provoke her.

She loves animals and nature and they seem to respond well to her, which made her calm when she was taken to the yokai forest. she also has a habit of picking up the characteristics of any yokai that she has bonded with, like licking the back of her hand when board and purring when she gets petted on the head.

Ability

Gaia the essence of Nature: The ability to mimic the abilities of yokai that she has become friends with. it also gives her the ability to feel the essence of life within nature. limit to this is that she can't copy normal animals because they don't have any type of powers.

Yukine has gain a high spiritual awareness to the point, where she can sense the presence of the yokai from three city blocks away.

Bakeneko: Yukine has gained the powers and characteristics of a monster cat. Claws strong enough to cut through steel.

Nine lives: the ability to revive nine times. the limit to the is that it only restarts after once a month.

Yukine's agility, balance, and sense are 5x that of a normal cats. She can slip through tight spots pretty easily, even a few places that would be impossible for a normal human. her strength is pretty good, as she can lift a house and she is mach 5 in speed.

Yukine has the ability to use the power of magic and necromancy.

Abel Kurokami NPC:

One of the most deadly Vector users alive.

Age: 24

Height 5'9

Birthplace:

Occupation: senior member at The Ministry of Eden.

Appearance

Abel has short golden blond hair, and two different different colored eyes, one brownish gold and the other topaz.

Post by SamJaz (12,796 posts) See mini bio Level 20

@LHWKnight: You're onto something, but you really want to give this a careful read through because of all the typos. I'm a bit concerned about his claim to be able to destroy "Anything", but I suppose that's limited by the target being touched by the energy.

A decent start. Could use a few more character flaws but this could be interesting.

Post by waybig1010101 (3,269 posts) See mini bio Level 14

@SamJaz said:

@LHWKnight: You're onto something, but you really want to give this a careful read through because of all the typos. I'm a bit concerned about his claim to be able to destroy "Anything", but I suppose that's limited by the target being touched by the energy.

A decent start. Could use a few more character flaws but this could be interesting.

this and nice i like the characters, but i just have a few questions more so the second one than the first one

"She is half fallen angel half vampire daughter of Lucifer the fallen angel and Lilith the vampire queen."

Are we allowed to use the real devil or whatever ( this one is not really directed at LHW, but everyone really as I am still I noob lol)

"Obviously, the user is the most powerful of vampires"

I really don't like the idea that you created the most powerful of vampires right off the back like that, but it is understandable if she is the daughter of satan and vampire queen i suppose.

but what is this

"Death-Force Manipulation - Control the death-force""

What does that even mean and i think that powers over death like that should just stick to Death himself IMO since he/she/it or whatever (forgot the joke that said it was lol) should have total domain over death itself since he is death.

But besides that i like it, it seems to me that your first character would be a mid tier and the second probably a top tier, and your third.......... I like the image LOL.

Overall so far so good

Post by SamJaz (12,796 posts) See mini bio Level 20

@waybig1010101: @LHWKnight:

As I said, this was a start, nowhere near completed.

1) No copyright names allowed, so Lucifer and Lilith are out.

2) As Waybig rightly said, you cannot call yourself the most powerful of vampires. Otherwise, someone's gonna RP Alucard and tear your character a new one.

3) yeah, I get death control. Especially since there are so many mortal characters on the vice, You can be an adept necromancer, however. Talk to Fehafare for more details on that.

Post by waybig1010101 (3,269 posts) See mini bio Level 14

@SamJaz: i see so we can't use copyright names ok was a little unsure about that myself lol. Also i never really had a problem with the strongest vampire thing even though i do understand that such a statement could cause problems for others I just didn't like she was the best from the start even though i can see why she could be the strongest after developing her because of her parents it would make sense, except i didn't know using their names were against the rules like that lol. My only true problem really would be that death powers which i feel should just belong to death and thats it really unless death decides to give/allow someone some powers of death for whatever reason.

Post by Kuma_From_Argentina (6,763 posts) See mini bio Level 13
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@LHWKnight: Give limits to the atributes

What does it means "Well Beyond Human Standars?"

Post by LHWKnight (2,735 posts) See mini bio Level 12

@SamJaz: not that type of most powerful vampire, I mean the vampire that does have the vampire weakness. @waybig1010101: just means that she does have vampire weakness and is just born the strongest class of vampire. these are merely classes and nothing more. think (Akatsuki Kojo) (Mena tepes) (Alucard from castlevania)

Um... Lucifer is used a lot as just a name tho (Vali lucifer form DxD as an example), so you are going to have to explain that one and lilith was a demon in scriptures but not a vampire so two different entities. I did say lucifer is a fallen angel but I was thinking in the same vain as Lucifer from the devil is a part-timer (Not the exact Lucifer form the scriptures or the anime) This is just more of a question since Lucifer is used a lot.

AS for death-force, I kind of just through that in there without thinking, I will take that part out.

Post by SamJaz (12,796 posts) See mini bio Level 20

@LHWKnight: You're probably best not using such names to avoid confusion. Felocious, Syrath, Mirrak, all good alternative demon names to suggest originality.

Post by Kuma_From_Argentina (6,763 posts) See mini bio Level 13
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@LHWKnight: Your PM doesnt answer anything. You need to give your attributes at least baselines limits.

Well beyond human standars could mean a hundred different things

Post by waybig1010101 (3,269 posts) See mini bio Level 14

@LHWKnight: well can you at least change Vampire Physiology - "Obviously, the user is the most powerful of vampires" to something like "the user is of the highest class of vampire" so no one can misunderstand what you mean.

Post by Celestine (20 posts) See mini bio Level 8

@SamJaz: I agree with Kuma, you need to add more detail to some of those Superhuman abilities. Does he bend his body in impossible ways or is he like Nightcrawler or Spider-man.

Post by LHWKnight (2,735 posts) See mini bio Level 12

@Celestine: okay look at them and tell me which ones because I did explain a few.

Post by Fehafare (9,395 posts) See mini bio Level 13

@LHWKnight: Give examples of what they can do and point out the limitations. Explain what you mean and stuff like that. Write at least a small paragraph about each.

Post by Celestine (20 posts) See mini bio Level 8

@LHWKnight: It's as Feha said you want to add more descriptive information to all his powers. It necessary doesn't have to be a paragraph long, but it should give a better sense of his abilities.

  • Speed should be two categories. Travel and Fight/Reaction speed.
  • Combat capabilities
  • Knowledge: How much knowledge does he truly possess. Is it all pop Culture trivia or does he know the meaning of life. Example : My character Diego is pretty smart at getting dates, but if you ask him to pilot a spaceship he would be totally lost.
Post by Kuma_From_Argentina (6,763 posts) See mini bio Level 13
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@LHWKnight:

Supernatural Flexibility: Well beyond human standards, maybe on the level of a cat demons

Supernatural Reflexes: Well beyond human standards, can react to any situation right before it happens

Semi-immortality: will never age of aging.

1. What is a Cat Demon? Try to give a physical limit not a comparison, especially with comic books characters as their skills are quite variable.

2. He can react to any situation? How fast is he?

3. Never age of aging

4. How strong he is, how much can he lift? A bus is more or less 10 Tons how much is "way more"?

Post by LHWKnight (2,735 posts) See mini bio Level 12

@Kuma_From_Argentina: okay how about now

Post by Sonata (35,407 posts) See mini bio Level 20
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@LHWKnight: I see you like to use the power wikia lot. That's OK to use as a reference I use it myself; but you don't want your bio to have that same feel. A grocery list of powers. You want to put your own spin to your character; I lookk at the Supernatural combat section of this it just feels like you copied the technical terms and place them there. Come up with a name for his fighting style, then you can systematically add what he is capable of in sort of a story form. It won't look like a list.

Post by Kuma_From_Argentina (6,763 posts) See mini bio Level 13
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@LHWKnight: There are mixed up categories

You arent giving a number to his strength

The fighting style segment is a bunch of concept with no underlaying theme.

You are still using other characters as examples. Use numbers not characters, as character stats have enormous fluctuations depending on who is writting them

Not to mention your character overall stats making him more powerful than most of the other characters

Lifting a train engine means your characters lifts 120-200 Tons, lifting the whole trains ranks you from 3000 to 12000 tons

Stopping an average train going at the average train speed (144 Km/h) your character would need strength to stop 1160000 Tons, so he would need even more to stop the train and the momentum of said moving object.

The Durability is more or less good a city block is more or less on par of most characters.

All the Destructive Energy stuff is confusing. It seems like you copied it from somewhere as it seems out of context

Post by Kuma_From_Argentina (6,763 posts) See mini bio Level 13
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@LHWKnight:

Ryūdo's strength is well beyond a normal human ever since he was a kid and way before his power awakened. He could lift a bus by the time he was 14 and and could most likely lift a train and stop a bullet train.

You need more than 214500 Tons to stop the average Bullet train....

and 10X the speed of sound is a bit much, most of the character move at mach 1 or 2 (except for speed based exceptions like Hal)

You arent explaining the Destructive Energy at all. Please post here your repplies and not through PM, maybe I'm the one that is not getting it. And please refrain from using comparisons if you cant explain what an ability does on your own words is a clear sign you took it from somewhere else. Dont give those characters as examples because any reader with two brain cells will make the comparison as well, if you believe that they are different then explain it, dont make a comparion if, and I quote your PM,

"I only said those characters as an example, my strength and conditions are still different."

If your character strength and conditions are different then why do you need to compare them?

Post by LHWKnight (2,735 posts) See mini bio Level 12

@Kuma_From_Argentina: also when you compare you get the picture of what is happening. just because you can compare something visually, does not mean you can compare it to the core.

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