cei's bio

Topic started by rpgirl101 on Jan. 22, 2012. Last post by Masako_Hihashi 2 years, 8 months ago.
Post by rpgirl101 (7 posts) See mini bio Level 4

name: ceira arath

age: 17

height: 5ft 3in

weight: 125

sex: female

single

hair color: green/brown

her confusing life

Cei's life can be confusing. She works at a science lab in japan. Were they don't even know what type of person she is. Cei is a lost angel in our world, just looking for a way out.

powers

she can teleport

she can fly

she can turn into a demon dealing wall buster damage capacity

she can use a sheild ( can be very big )

heal

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

I have a feeling that you are Asakara

Post by rpgirl101 (7 posts) See mini bio Level 4

i'm his sister

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

@rpgirl101: Close enough, the wall busting description give away your proximity to Asakara

Post by realife102 (6 posts) See mini bio Level 3

haha that's actually funny cause i read barthez batlion didn't you want him to do that exact thing

Post by Phoenix_Wright (124 posts) See mini bio Level 10

@Kuro_San: Wait, what's going on here?

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

@realife102: For that exact reason I'm saying that it was kind of obvious if you think about it, it's not funny is just logical

This is another alt?

You should expand the bio a little bit more, flesh out the story and the powers, give your skills limits and description, and in a mnior note check your grammar

Post by realife102 (6 posts) See mini bio Level 3

why do you just talk down on any thing you can get your hands on

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

@Phoenix_Wright: I dont really know

@realife102: Expand the story of the character, and explain what are the limits of the powers.

Say what is this character goal and wirte about her personality

Post by realife102 (6 posts) See mini bio Level 3

it isn't your choice what she does

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

@realife102: I'm only advicing not ordering, is my opinion as fellow and a little bit more experienced player

And is more than likely than you are rpgirl101

Post by Newdeath (18,555 posts) See mini bio Level 19

@Kuro_San: Don't be modest. You have way more experience.

@realife102: You don't really have a choice in the matter. If you wanna RP here, you have to write out your character's descriptions well. You need to be more specific than her powers are: teleport (how far can she teleport?), heal (can she heal others or just herself or both and if so, can she heal from just a single atom?) etc. things like that. Nobody's gonna want to RP with a character with such a weak descriptions, especially because there are no stated limits for your character's powers nor have you written a proper story explaining her motives or a section that deals with her personality.

ND

Post by BattleHeiz (5,765 posts) See mini bio Level 15

@rpgirl101: Love your Style

Post by realife102 (6 posts) See mini bio Level 3

thanks that is nice to say to my sister and we all write the same so... i'll take that has a compliment

Post by BattleHeiz (5,765 posts) See mini bio Level 15

@realife102 said:

thanks that is nice to say to my sister and we all write the same so... i'll take that has a compliment

I mean't to say that there is no fun in describing everything, even now most of well-known characters are still mystery to us

And there are forums for that

And combination of story and people you meet should mold your character into something gnarly

Not just you writing about how cool your character is

And people should decide their fate

Ok got carried away

Thats what i get for reading Sandman

Well that and lots and lots of exciting dreams

mostly nightmares but i am not picky

Post by haseo_yashimora (5,507 posts) See mini bio Level 14

o gods more alts *face palms*

Post by Newdeath (18,555 posts) See mini bio Level 19

@haseo_yashimora: LOL

ND

Post by haseo_yashimora (5,507 posts) See mini bio Level 14

@Newdeath said:

@haseo_yashimora: LOL

ND

;) i threw all mine away ^^

Post by Kuro_San (1,339 posts) See mini bio Level 11

@haseo_yashimora: You are the person with least right to judge having a lot of unnecesary and underdeveloped alts

Post by haseo_yashimora (5,507 posts) See mini bio Level 14

@Kuro_San said:

@haseo_yashimora: You are the person with least right to judge having a lot of unnecesary and underdeveloped alts

troollolololololollo u mad bro?

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