How would you have written Bleach?

Topic started by LuffyDUzumaki on July 10, 2011. Last post by Bellum 3 years, 2 months ago.
Post by LuffyDUzumaki (161 posts) See mini bio Level 9
With bleach going down the drain and disappointment of about 90% of its fans how would you rewrite this series.
Post by Destinyheroknight (10,283 posts) See mini bio Level 21

I would have cut some of the parts, and make it a little faster (so it won't drag)

I'll add some more character develpment

Post by Bellum (127 posts) See mini bio Level 8
I'd be much more interested in something a little less shonen-like. :P
 
When I first started reading Bleach I thought "Oh, cool. A manga about a high school kid who becomes a "shinigami" and has to save ghosts from being eaten".
 
Then I read a little further and found a typical shonen with sub-par characterization. :(
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