Mr. Monk and the worlds #1 detective(Monk-Death Note crossover)

Topic started by Haofan123 on Aug. 2, 2011. Last post by Superevil225 2 years, 11 months ago.
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Heh, nice. I love situations like this. XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
thanks! Im trying to give my fanfic a slightly happier tone to it and i think that this situation will do the trick
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: I was thinking of ending mine off with a sad ending, but I've already planned out a tear jerking happy end. :P I love how my comedy is becoming more serious than your mystery. XD I really like how yours going though. :)
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
nah, your fanfic is a riot! The chemestry between claire and czeslaw is great! I feel that i have to make mine funnier though because the 'Monk" series puts a heavy emphasis on comedy and so far Ive only been working with the seriousness of death note
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: I guess you probably need to find a balance between the Monk and the Death Note. But I do think that the move you pulled in your most recent chapter will help create the balance.
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
Bump! Chapter 11 is ready! Feedback greatly appriciated!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Nice chapter. :P LOL L's so cute. XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225: thanks for the feedback! by the way, do you think that my fanfic has gotten any funnier?
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: I'd say so, yeah. :) I like how the humour isn't excessively done, but it's still clever.
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
Bump! chapter 12 is up! feedback appreciated!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Very neat! Let the twists and turns begin!! :D
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
Bump! Chapter 13 is up! Feedback is greatly appreciated!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Nice work, as always! Keep it up!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225 said:
Nice work, as always! Keep it up!
Thanks! I look forward to your next work as well!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Me too, I just don't know if the series I have a fic idea for is popular enough... D:
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225 said:

@Haofan123: Me too, I just don't know if the series I have a fic idea for is popular enough... D:

you never know until you try! your other fanfics have been met with a lot of praise from other users so I think you should definitely give whatever you're thinking of a try before writing it off completely
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
Bump! chapter 14 is up! Feedback is greatly appreciated!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Nice stuff! I really like how this is developing.
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225 said:
Nice stuff! I really like how this is developing.
thanks! Im planning to bring this fanfic to an end soon, but not before a few more twists and turns!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
Bump! chapter 15 is up! feedback is greatly appreciated!
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