Mr. Monk and the worlds #1 detective(Monk-Death Note crossover)

Topic started by Haofan123 on Aug. 2, 2011. Last post by Superevil225 3 years, 1 month ago.
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
thank you very much! I appriciate you commenting on all of my chapters! And Im looking forward to the next chapter of your baccano fanfic :)
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Your welcome, and thanks. :P I'm working on it right now but I'm trying to decide if I'll make it emotional, or just funny. We'll see. XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

Bump, sixth chapter is complete! feedback is appriciated!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Wow, you're getting these out like nobody's business. Fantastic chapter! I can't really say how well you're writing Monk (Cause I don't know the character) but I can say you've got L pretty much nailed! Looking forward to chapter 7~!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
thanks! Im going on a trip soon so im trying to get as many chapters out as i can. This will probably be my last chapterfor a while but ill definitely start back up again once I have full access to a computer again. And yeah Monk is definitely the hardest character to write. Honestly, my protrayal of him in my fanfic doesnt do the onscreen version of monk justice
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: *melts onto floor* Nooo~ It's getting so good! Well I might be on my trip around the same time as you, so hopefully I can read it as soon as the chapter come out. XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
lol dont worry!   My trip will allow me to think up the rest of the story so will  it  all planned out when I start up again :)
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Yay!!! Probably the same will happen with mine. I can't wait though, you really are doing a great job with this. :)
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225

thanks a lot! Im also eager to see how your baccano fanfic turns out. its getting really good especially since you added firo into the mix!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Aww thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now. :P
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
I look forward to it :)
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

Bump! I didnt think I would be able to this week, but chapter 7 has just been added! Feedback is appriciated!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: I see what he did thar!! XD As always, good chapter! :) I'll be looking forwards to the next one!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

BUMP! CH8 is ready!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Delicious schemes! XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225 said:

@Haofan123: Delicious schemes! XD

thanks! Ok now chapter 8 is officially my last chapter before i  go on my trip lol feedback appriciated!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

Bump! chapter 9 is here. Feedback i greatly appriciated!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Great work~! That last little part was touching~
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
thanks! ive been waiting to use that touching little bit for a while now
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

Bump! chapter 10 is here! Feedback is greatly appriciated!
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