Mr. Monk and the worlds #1 detective(Monk-Death Note crossover)

Topic started by Haofan123 on Aug. 2, 2011. Last post by Superevil225 3 years, 3 months ago.
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13


Summary: A serial killer is on the loose in San Fransisco California. Due to the importance of the matter, L is called in, however, the SFPD also has Adrian Monk on the case. 
Rating:PG 13 
  I DO NOT OWN DEATH NOTE OR MONK IN ANY WAY SHAPE OR FORM.
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Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Wait a tick.... wasn't this already made? What happened to the old one.? orz
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225 said:

Wait a tick.... wasn't this already made? What happened to the old one.? orz


thats what i was wondering. It just disapeared so i had to rewrite the whole first chapter in addition to the second one. So, what do you think of the second chapter?
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Aww, seriously? Man that sucks.
But hay! It's still awesome. I adore the second chapter. Despite not being familiar with the Monk side of the cross over, I'm going to read this!! XD
The batman comment was so funny! LOL
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225 said:
@Haofan123: Aww, seriously? Man that sucks. But hay! It's still awesome. I adore the second chapter. Despite not being familiar with the Monk side of the cross over, I'm going to read this!! XD The batman comment was so funny! LOL

thanks! and yeah, i  hope that this one doesnt get deleted as well. I seriously dont want to rewrite the whole thing AGAIN.
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: You should copy and paste it into a word document and save it, just in case. :)
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225 said:
@Haofan123: You should copy and paste it into a word document and save it, just in case. :)

lol yeah good idea.
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: I always do that, because technology doesn't like me. XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

Bump! Chapter 3 is finished, feedback is appriciated!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Nice stuff. For some reason this reminds me of the Godhand Arc in Dolls. Basically this guy is mimicing his favourite murder mystery novel by killing people, and leaving his bloody hand print on the wall. When they check the finger prints, they don't actually find the killer, because the real killer is framing the murders. Wouldn't it be interesting if the car wasn't the killer's, or there was something more in the car!!! XD This is really interesting! Great job!!!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
thanks for the feedback! im definitely planning for there to be more to the car than what meets the eye.
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: What if it was the next target's car..... Nah, that might make the murders too easy to prevent. Well, I'll keep guessing until you make the big reveal!! XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225 said:
@Haofan123: What if it was the next target's car..... Nah, that might make the murders too easy to prevent. Well, I'll keep guessing until you make the big reveal!! XD

oh trust me you wont be dissapointed lol. Keep your eyes peeled for my next chapter!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

Bump, Just added chapter 4. Feedback is appricciated!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: *Reads*
  Can't wait for what happens next!! So excited man!!!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
lol thanks!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

Bump! chapter 5 is ready! feedback appriciated as always!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: I'd like to use the same gif here. XD Great chapter!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
thanks! Im glad people actually enjoy my writing!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: <3 You're an awesome writer so you totally deserve every inch of praise!
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