Give Pops A Hug - Baccano! - PG13

Topic started by Superevil225 on July 17, 2011. Last post by Superevil225 3 years, 1 month ago.
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Chapter six is up! Comments please! XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
Good chapter. I like how we see a human side of claire that we never see in the anime
Post by kashif1 (1,813 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225: Just read both chapters, Rachael is pretty well written.  As far as claire goes, is it possible to write him out of character? 
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: THanks! Yeah, I totally love humanizing people. XD
 
@kashif1
XD THanks. You know, I should try writing him out of character one of these days. :P
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
CHAPTER SEVEN
Ice, Ice, Baby!
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225
amazing chapter. cant wait to see what claires chld is like!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Thank you!!!! <3 I'm gunna have fun writing him. XD
Post by kashif1 (1,813 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225: its getting a lot more serious, not necessarily a bad thing.  And now i'm wondering if Claire and Chane ever did have a child.
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@kashif1: Yeah, they did. I don't know their official names and number. BUT his grand children are called Claudia and Charon, so he must have had kids. :P
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Added chapter eight and put all the chapters under spoiler warning to organize it all. :)
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
Interesting chapter. Good character development on claires part. Also, good idea with the spoiler alerts. It really makes the fanfic easier to read. Im going to try that out for myself right now
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17

Finale chapter is up!!!

 Yes! This is it! THe touching end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please be kind about that obligatory, yet OOC comment by Luck
Post by kashif1 (1,813 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225: I liked it, its nice to see these characters in situations that don't involve gallons of blood and severed fingers.
 
  By the way wasn't it your idea not to do the spoiler tag thing?
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@kashif1: yeah, because they might be changing the text editor thing. I was expecting the fan fic to be only 4 chapters long or so. Once it came to be so long, I was like "Hmmm maybe he was right"
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