Give Pops A Hug - Baccano! - PG13

Topic started by Superevil225 on July 17, 2011. Last post by Superevil225 2 years, 10 months ago.
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Summary: All Claire Stanfield wanted was a second chance with Czeslaw, and a child to call his own.
Characters: Claire, Czeslaw.
Genera: Humour (although the first chapter isn't funny), 'family'.
Rating: PG13  
Chapters: 9
Status: Complete
Warnings: Foul language, violence, mature themes.
 Disclaimer: I don't own any characters or anything to do with Baccano! this is a work of fan-made fiction.
Do not plagiarize or use any of of my fan-fiction and writing. 
Note: The fic is getting long so I just put all the chapter under spoiler tags so it's easier to navigate.
 

Chapter One: The Park

Chapter Two: The Tickets

Chapter Three: The Game

Chapter Four: Exposure Therapy

 

Chapter Five: The Things I Do For Love

Chapter Six: Another Chance


Chapter Seven: Ice, Ice, Baby

 
 

Chapter Eight: Brother, My Brother

 
 

Chapter Nine (Finale): The Godfather

 


 
Again, no using my work with out my permission. Please comment, and give criticism. No flame. I will cry. You don't wanna see me cry. TT.TT
Post by kashif1 (1,813 posts) See mini bio Level 13
Claire is written pretty well, not so sure about Czeslaw though, then again i have no idea how he acts in a normal setting.
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@kashif1: Yeah, he difficult to write. OTL
From what I've seen and from the little bit of the books I've read he's generally serious and pessimistic. *shakes fist*
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Update. Second chapter done.
Post by kashif1 (1,813 posts) See mini bio Level 13
You gonna bring Chane into this?
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@kashif1: Oh yeah. :P Soon.
Post by Fire Star (3,730 posts) See mini bio Level 16
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@Superevil225: This was a good first one ! I am posting my first one today as well XD
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Update. WARNING the third chapter is unexpectedly dark.
Post by kashif1 (1,813 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225: You write psychopaths well.
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@kashif1: Thank you. I like writing them too. XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

Nice story.You 're doing a great job with cliares character. He's exactly like how he was in the anime

Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Thanks! He's so fun to write. XD
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Updated and added Chapter Four: Exposure Therapy. I'm so excited for Chapter Five. It's going to be great.
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

good fourth chapter. Im eager to see claires next attempt to bond with czeslaw

Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Thanks. :) Oh, it's going to be glorious. :P
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
Chapter five is up. I think i went a bit overboard. XD
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13

LMFAO hilarious chapter is hilarious! This is great work!
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: Thanks! I was a bit worried it got a bit over the top. LOL
Post by Haofan123 (3,675 posts) See mini bio Level 13
@Superevil225 said:
@Haofan123: Thanks! I was a bit worried it got a bit over the top. LOL

Lol no way! this stuff is great! All we need now is isaac and miria and we have a party
Post by Superevil225 (6,742 posts) See mini bio Level 17
@Haofan123: I should somehow throw them in there. They're AWESOME. XD
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